Move On

January 14, 2010
Keep moving on,
No matter what happens,
You said you were strong,
So move on,
Move on.
Times may be tough,
I know you hurt to the touch,
But keep moving on,
Your troubles will soon be gone.
Your music plays,
You love this song,
So sing along,
And move on,
Move on.
A little bit longer and you'll be okay,
So keep moving on,
Day by day,
Your troubles will soon go away.
You said you were strong,
So keep moving on,
Move on.

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musical marie said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 6:25 pm
All I can say is wow.
This poem really inspired me.
You can take pride in knowing that you really affected someone in a positive way (:
This was incredible, I absolutely love it.
S1234 said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 6:53 pm
I like this a lot. Keep on righting! Good work.
Comment on or rate my work if you can!!
hollyhottell said...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 8:38 pm
i agree this is a really good poem. i liked it alot. you could make that into a song it would be really catchy.
Toni-Ann said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 4:22 pm
I love this poem. I totally get what your saying. just keep moving on. - - Amazing poem :)
sarahbug16 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:34 pm
WOW!! oh my lovely julie friend u have a great talent.....KEEP WORKING HARD!! wuts this about anyway??
CaptainFabulous. replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 4:27 pm
why thank you sarah XD
and this is basically me telling myself and others that no matter how bad things get you can always "keep moving on" dont let life get in your way
. replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 6:16 pm
AAAAHHH, this makes sense now.....thanks for commenting on my poems. i was telling ms cook today about this site and she got all giggly and shes like "u have a true talent for writing, u r very good."
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