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Accepting Your Death

Your death was early,
It was not fair.
Your abrupt end,
Was not given with care.
Yet still I accept,
We all die in the end,
You just came first,
Out of all my friends.
Your body has passed on,
But you have not died.
The thought of you carries on,
And I wear it with pride.
It took some time,
But my crying has ceased,
Because now i realize,
You will rest in peace.

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Bradley_F. said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 8:31 am:
good job with this poem. comment back on mine if u wish
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sarahbug16This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:32 pm:
is this about Jerimiah?? if so RIP!! and very good, i like this one...good job chicky
CaptainFabulous. replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 4:19 pm :
yes it is!!
and thxx :)
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