Sadly

January 4, 2010
By Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
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Favorite Quote:
" When you give it all up, you get it all. You end up losing absolutely nothing, other than some well cherished opinions and ideas. "











- Dennis Genpo Merzel


I still see your face
sometimes
I feel like you left without a
trace.
Why did we end?
Because you liked someone else?
I miss you and your goofy grin
Tried so hard not to write
about you,
but for me,
its hard

to
forget.
Forget my silence
forget my regret.
Easy for you,
one to another
But i'm steady strong
and hard to move on.



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on Oct. 4 2010 at 11:30 pm
apocalyptigirl BRONZE, Staunton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T PANIC." ~from The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams

I liked everything about this except for the last 2 lines: "But I'm steady strong / and hard to move on." Does she mean she has difficulty moving on? The pronoun to verb relationship here was weird...it might make more sense as "But i'm steady strong / and it's hard to move on." Would you mind reading my poem Blue Eyes? Thank you!


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