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The thunder rolls, the lightning strikes
the carpet is painted white.
The rain pounds, the wind blows
leaves are what fall to the ground.
My tears are flowing,
they stain that oh so perfect
white carpet red.
They drain my heart like a drought
because you my dear have
ripped it out.
You said you cared, but I guess
you lied.
So let me cry so I can stain
that oh so perfect white.





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trestonsgirl said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 9:28 pm
ive been reading alot of your work and ur a very very good writer im sorrya bout ur diabetes as well please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
 
fightin_4_a_cure replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 9:45 am
thank you!
 
trestonsgirl replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 2:15 pm
no prob ur a really really good writer:)
 
fightin_4_a_cure replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 4:15 pm
Naw, I'm not really that good. I just know how to express things that I feel with heart.
 
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