Rain From Tears

January 2, 2010
By Poetiquette PLATINUM, Palmyra, Pennsylvania
Poetiquette PLATINUM, Palmyra, Pennsylvania
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Tears floating along gently
Being swept off sad faces
Carried by the breeze
They swirl up into a cloud
And then are released
Onto hundreds of sad places


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on Feb. 7 2010 at 11:52 pm
RainbowXKeys BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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I really like how you made everything come to life with the action words that you used. This is beautiful.(:


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