Murder

January 11, 2010
By Anonymous

I am a murderer in disguise
I am secretly planning your demise
You won't find out as you're not wise
You will die for all you lies

At you house I will arrive
I will torture you
Of the basics you'll be deprived
I will strive to skin you alive

I can't wait to end your life
Because your hurtful lies already ended mine.


The author's comments:
I was extremely angry with someone constantly lying to me, so I wrote this to vent my anger. (it's not a very good poem but it helped me)

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on Feb. 5 2010 at 9:11 am
Smickles PLATINUM, Buffalo Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There is a reason that the people from your past did not make it to your future

:P

im sorry to hear that you were upset :/

i just wanted to say that your rhyming sounds a wee bit forced. now, i ddint say it was bad, because it isnt! just keep practicing rhyming and keep writing, and look for your own certain rhythm. you will find it and, and be better then you already are ^_^


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