Murder

January 11, 2010
By , Johannesburg, South Africa
I am a murderer in disguise
I am secretly planning your demise
You won't find out as you're not wise
You will die for all you lies

At you house I will arrive
I will torture you
Of the basics you'll be deprived
I will strive to skin you alive

I can't wait to end your life
Because your hurtful lies already ended mine.





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Smickles This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 9:11 am
im sorry to hear that you were upset :/
i just wanted to say that your rhyming sounds a wee bit forced. now, i ddint say it was bad, because it isnt! just keep practicing rhyming and keep writing, and look for your own certain rhythm. you will find it and, and be better then you already are ^_^
 
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