Perfect False Judgement

January 11, 2010
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Why must we judge the book by its cover?
Why does it matter who is his lover?
We will all search for most of our lives
For the one who is perfect, then together they’ll strive
To achieve the best we must be true
And Perfect is Perfect. According to Who?
You people don’t want to see them together
But no matter what they’ll love forever
What you get is what you see with your eyes
Then how you react determines your size.
Tap him on the shoulder, you ask him to walk
Then in the woods, You’re starting to talk.
You beat him to the ground and tell him lies
You call him names, yet he stands and tries
To defend himself, make You see, enough’s enough.
You hit then laugh. Think that You’re tough?
Now it’s time to see the light inside
The shining glow the perfect pride,
The dreams, the laughs, the hope, the joy,
All emitting from this boy.
Take a step back, see what you’ve done?
You thought it was all a bit of fun.
Rewind to the beginning, let’s make this right
Don’t stand up and start to fight
Look around and I hope you’ll see
The wonderful things this life can be.
Pick up the pieces, spread love around
Then maybe eventually you’ll have found
The missing half of your soul, the one who’ll play the perfect part
To mend the pieces of your heart.





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ZAVERY said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 1:56 pm
Nice poem! People, can you plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz read some of my work? I'm kinda new to TeenInk.com.
 
Katherine93 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:04 am
thanks! :) I'll have a look at your stuff, I know it's a bit of a pain when no-one reads it, or leaves comments on how you can improve and what they thought of it so I'll try and be as helpful as possible... :)
 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 4:07 pm
Thanks for the comments! I just realized something that might make you angry. Okay, I have two accounts with the same username, for no apparent reason. One is new and one is old. I'm not new because this is the old file. I'm so sorry, Imagination!
 
Katherine93 replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 5:38 am

thats fine really ZAVERY, i dont mind.

 i would have read your work anyways, as i try to read the work of as many people as possible.. and everyone that comments on mine. :)

whats your new and the names of your work and i'll have a read?

;)

 

 
Katherine93 replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 5:40 am

0.o ahem.....

*username.....

:s woops...

lol :)

 
ZAVERY replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 3:11 pm
If you want to read them, then just click on my username. You don't have to read the, by the way. Thanks!   ;)
 
Katherine93 replied...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 3:43 am

thats alright i want to.

i meant what is your new username for the new account and i'll read your new stuff

:)

 
Smickles This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 9:15 am
this is very good! im sorry about what happened to your family's close freind, i think its terrible and your poem is like the reflection of my exact thoughts >.<
over all, well done!
 
Imagination! replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 3:28 am
thankyou so much.=D it was so hard to get through escpecially when the people that killed him were found not guilty, and this poem was one of 3 that i wrote to vent my feelings. i really appreciate your feedback!
 
Imagination! said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 3:26 am
this piece was posted on this website after i entered it in a poetry competition, since then i found that the piece was liked by the judges of the competition and will be put in a poetry anthology! yay! :D
 
Smickles This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 7:18 pm
congrats! you deserve it this poem is amazing :3
 
Katherine93 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:03 am
thanks! :)
 
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