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January 9, 2010
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Sweat beats down my back
Attempting to cool me
I try my hardest
With all my strength
To push my world
A massive bolder
Up and around the world
Slipping and messing up
I try my hardest
With all my strength
Each day altering, building
Better stronger muscles
As my heart rocks inside
My chest, burning
I try my hardest
With all my strength
to make it
But too often...
The sun doesn't rise
And im left in the dark
To push alone.

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chu-chi,!!! said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:30 am
This was a really awesome passionate poem I absolutely loved it. It was very powerful and deep within meaning, I caught the just behind it and I can relate because sometimes it's as if I'm all alone. But enough of me, you did an excellent job with this I look for more of your writings.
DallysGrrl said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 10:48 am
This is a really strong poem. Its emotional and the words you chose were amazing together. I luv this poem! its not 2 complicated or rambly but its passionate. really awesome. keep on writing!! i cant wait 2 c more of ur work.
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