Bowl of Oranges MAG

January 9, 2010
By more_weight PLATINUM, Danville, Virginia
more_weight PLATINUM, Danville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Tread softly, for you thread on my dreams.


Back and forth his legs swing
Small hands are clasped
On the cool counter
Underneath the wonderfully soft
Locks of bright red hair
Solemn blue eyes watch
As his mother swirls
Around the pale mixture
In the bowl that used to hold
Oranges

The author's comments:
I really don't know

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Duckie430 said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 9:15 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

I'm not really sure what this is about, but I really like it :)

on Feb. 28 2011 at 9:14 am
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Things aren't always what they seem.

i like it a lot really :D and its not supost to make a lot of since its about a small child watching there mother work remembering that the bowl held oranges before 

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:14 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

This is amazing. I don't know what it is about it just it's so short and descriptive and amazing. Just wow. Keep up the good work.

on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:47 am
LEBRONISTHEKING561, State Center, Iowa
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nice and simple.

wesley d said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:46 am
wesley d, Shady, Iowa
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short but it says alot

on Feb. 24 2011 at 5:52 pm
ChelseaS BRONZE, West Dundee, Illinois
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very cute! it's nice cause it's simple :)




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