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My Heart let go to Snow

January 8, 2010
By graveschick1161 SILVER, Plainfield, Illinois
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I am surrounded by people
But I feel completely
and utterly
alone.

My worries,
My troubles
are all
Gone.

I look into the distance
To find
Something
greater

But all I can see is.
Nothing.
There must be something
Beyond
this world

Someplace
Majestic


What
Path
Can get me there,


I don’t know
Which
way
to turn
but to follow my heart

Do I take a step
forward,
Left















Or








Right

Does that lead me
Any closer?

Realizing on the way
It’s does not matter as much
As the destination
But it’s the journey
That counts.

© Anton J., Philadelphia, PA

The author's comments:
My English teacher took my class out of the presence of the school, while it was snowing. She said write poetry on how you feel from the snow. This is where I created my poem called Snow.
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holly1221 said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:12 pm
holly1221, Plainfield, Illinois
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Wow - what a powerful piece! I really like this!