December 22, 2009
By lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

the horrible feeling of rejection my biggest fear ever .
what did i do to deserve it i try but i never can succeed .
Have you ever had that feeling in your stomache thats just won't go away ?
well this is so deep .
wanting to cry but holding it back so no one will know what i'm thinking about .
but why did he say no ?
why did i do it ?
i am so stupid maybe i should of just stuck with my feeling that i had first .
just the thought of this is killing me .
so why am i writing about it ?
i have no clue .
can you tell me why i can't find the right person .

The author's comments:
i was in isp when i wrote this and it was this year (2009)but ne way i wrote it cuz i asked this one boy out and he said no and i was a lil bit sad

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on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:24 pm
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

Omg! Lol, another poem I can relate too.. I asked my bestfriend of seven years if he'd go out with me, and like hang out and stuff, and he said no, because he's in "love" with my bestfriend Kadie... it was terrible, and I asked him in the lunch room at school, and I got to my table, (he got moved for throwing a grape across the cafe... i know right?) and I just burst into tears, and everyone seen, so I'm not good with rejection of anykind lmao. I really LOVE this poem, I should show HIM lol. <3

on Feb. 7 2010 at 10:47 am
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

If he rejected you, then he obviously is missing out on something good.

Men like to judge on first impression.


Wait for that special someone to find you.

Then you will know.

This is a very good poem by the way

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