Confession

January 7, 2010
Blinded from the start,
then were torn apart!
Never asked the question,
up til this confession!

As I try to take your hand,
hoping you would understand!
You get up and walk away,
I try to make you stay!
You say "no" "never",
but I see something that will last forever!

You start to hate,
this isn't our fate!
I try to make things right,
so the future will be bright!

As I try to take your hand,
hoping you would understand!
You get up and walk away,
I try to make you stay!
You say "no" "never",
but I see something that will last forever!

I try to make love mend,
praying we will betogether in the end!
So I go and shout,
hey Alana do you want to go out?!





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Kaitbryn said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 6:14 pm
Really good. Hey read your profile, if you hate to write, how come you have a posted poem?
 
CBB1112 replied...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:50 am
well you commented on the improved version already and yeah I know, I do hate writing much.
 
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