Thunderstorm

January 11, 2010
By Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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Thunder crash,
Lightening flash,
Iluminates the skies.
Comstant beat of the rain,
Wistling wind hollowing through the trees.
Clouds clash and lightening flash,
House lights flicker: tink, tink.
My heart pounds in my ears: boo boom, boo boom.


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on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:47 pm
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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i am terribly sorry for the spelling mistakes. i was not expecting this piece to get online. it was just a school assignment

on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:42 pm
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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thank you :)

on Jan. 25 2010 at 12:58 am
rachelggggggg BRONZE, San Marino, CA, California
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"Wherever you go, no matter what the weather, always bring your own sunshine." -Anthony J. D'Angelo

Wow I really like the rhythm of the first two lines! drew me in :)

on Jan. 24 2010 at 7:50 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Well, it is mostly descriptive in short sparks. It could flow a little bit better. But even so, it's rather good.

on Jan. 23 2010 at 11:20 am
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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I am who I am. Your approval is not needed

thank you :)

on Jan. 23 2010 at 11:20 am
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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what would you like to see more of in the poem?

on Jan. 23 2010 at 11:16 am
Autumn126 BRONZE, Sleepy Hollow, Illinois
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I am who I am. Your approval is not needed

thanks for your words :) they mean alot. i actually wasn't expecting this peice to get on the internet so thats why there are spelling mistakes. i am definitly not pleased with them but i can't change them. oh well, but i'm glad that you liked it :)

on Jan. 22 2010 at 2:53 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

on Jan. 22 2010 at 6:40 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

I like the poem, it's pretty good, but could be more.

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:57 pm
MCGlowstick SILVER, Pullman, Michigan
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suspenseful fast action fun descriptives


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