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Desperate

By , <3, MI
She was loved by no one before,
One day, she will transform,
and all eyes will be on her...

Who taught me to be like this,
Who taught me you had to be loved by everyone,
Who taught me everyone had to gravitate towards you,
What made me so...desperate?





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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 7:06 pm
This is good. And i think your comments hit me harder than the poem. No need for desperation or an eye of approval as long as you like yourself. Don't change for anyone but you. Yeah yeah i know, you're thinking, w.e I've heard that before. But ya know, just thought i'd say it once more. and keep writing or else i'll be bored to tears without something to read!!! =]
 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 11:19 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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