Desperate

January 6, 2010
By Anonymous

She was loved by no one before,
One day, she will transform,
and all eyes will be on her...

Who taught me to be like this,
Who taught me you had to be loved by everyone,
Who taught me everyone had to gravitate towards you,
What made me so...desperate?


The author's comments:
I don't know why I'm the way I am, stupid, self-conscious, and scared. I need to change...

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Jan. 24 2010 at 7:06 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
34 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

This is good. And i think your comments hit me harder than the poem. No need for desperation or an eye of approval as long as you like yourself. Don't change for anyone but you. Yeah yeah i know, you're thinking, w.e I've heard that before. But ya know, just thought i'd say it once more. and keep writing or else i'll be bored to tears without something to read!!! =]

on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:19 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!