Dying

January 6, 2010
By Jka_in_Wonderland GOLD, Canton, Ohio
Jka_in_Wonderland GOLD, Canton, Ohio
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Alone down in this hole
But for the little bugs
Crawling up the walls
Darkness seeps in
Enough! you want to yell
For the silence is
Ghastly and you strain to
Hear anyone out there
Ignorance is bliss
Just bearable enough
Knowing nothing of your fate
Little do you know
Many possible deaths are
Near at any given time
One being dehydration
Plus lack of any warmth
Quiet is everything
Rather like your approaching death
Shivers going down your spine
Truthfully you are scared
Underground in this
Vertical hole is not
Where you want to be
Xeric is this place
You are going to die soon
Zero chance you'll survive


The author's comments:
I forgot to type the line for J in the first version. . .

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on Sep. 2 2010 at 7:13 pm
beautifuldreamer GOLD, Hanover, Maryland
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At first I didn't notice how the lines are the alphabet but once I did it became even more amazing! I love how you keep it flowing even though each line is short

on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:28 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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