GUFN-Forever

January 6, 2010
By Michaela_I BRONZE, Columbus, Montana
Michaela_I BRONZE, Columbus, Montana
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When I decided to leave, I didn't think you would take it so hard.

“You're trapping me,” I said. And those were the words that killed him. The words that came together and made their own decisions for him.

Whether to cry...
Whether to apologize...
Whether to feel...
Whether to understand that I was GUFN- Gone until further notice.

It snowed the next day. I woke up with a stiff neck, frozen toes, and swollen eyes.
Eyes, that too, had been crying, Eyes that were held only for him.

“I don't understand” he exclaimed, and I replied “you'll get it”
As the door slowly, silently, closed behind me...

I was GUFN- gone until further notice

The author's comments:
This a was very big triumph in my life. Getting sober. In this piece I refer to drugs as a relationship. And using an empty promise, as my main point. While I was getting sober, I used to think,that as soon as I got out of treatment, I was going to return to my old life. But I didn't.

With this piece I left it open to a persons own interpretations.

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on Jan. 20 2010 at 11:29 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx




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