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When I fell

December 21, 2009
By NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments

I’m afraid
Of falling without wings,
I’m terrified
Of losing you and of other things,
But I’m mostly frightened
Of this love and its strings

Because when I fell,
You made me feel
Like I was under a spell,
As if my heart was yours to steal
And it hurts knowing,
That I can ever be so exposed
And this ache is forever growing,
This love seems over imposed

My heart stops beating,
A silence in my chest
My breathing is depleting,
It feels like I’m going into cardiac arrest

Because when I fell,
You made me feel
Like I was under a spell,
As if my heart was yours to steal
And it hurts knowing,
That I can ever be so exposed
And this ache is forever growing,
This love seems over imposed

I want to be free,
From all sense and feeling
I want to be able to see,
Through the darkness you’ve been concealing
I want to hear,
The meanings behind the words you mutter
To know that you’re sincere,
When you say you love me and I felt your heart flutter


Because when I fell,
You made me feel
Like I was under a spell,
As if my heart was yours to steal
And it hurts knowing,
That I can ever be so exposed
And this ache is forever growing,
This love seems over imposed
Yet deep down I know,
That all this is real
And that maybe-just maybe-I’m ready to truly feel


The author's comments:
My relationship with m ex is complicated, and we both know it. And I don't know if, and I may be too young, I'm be in love. But I do know that there's something between us that keeps pulling us back together. The only thing I don't know is whether or not I'm ready to feel again

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Riley141 GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 4:05 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

This was realy good.I liked that it was repetitve. You are a verry good writer. Keep writing...

 



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