The Other Me

December 20, 2009
On the outside I'm a happy, cheerful, and positive person.
But theres another side within, one dark, gloomy, and full of saddness.
I hide those feelings very well, but sometimes let them reel.
Just because they can't be seen does not mean they are not felt.
Pain takes over on the inside trying to work its way out.
I do my best to keep it in, but for how long I cannot tell.
My heart keeps breaking, and yet my smile just gets bigger.
My emotions are like a dormant volcano, someday they just might erupt hurting those around.

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robert This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:50 pm
This is another piece that you have written that i can relate to. It flows nicely, and is well written. Good job!
Lovebug07 replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:56 pm
Thanks so much!!! That really means alot!! :)
Danica said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 9:43 pm
This is exactly like me! You put it into words so nicely.  Would you mind checking out my work sometime? :)
Lovebug07 replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:19 pm
Thanks so much!!! And I'll be sure to check out your work!! :) Thanks again
PrettyBoy said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 9:09 am
wow ..i can relate to that from the relationships i had..very nice
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:12 pm
Thanks!!! Means alot :)
SilentDeath134 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 8:51 pm
wow that was amazing thats the same way i feel
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