Holocaust

December 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

No hope left
No sense in returning
The thick ashes fill my lungs
I look around people are dying
Gunshots, Screams, and Prayers are all near
Everything anyone ever asked for is now gone
Nothing left except the courage to move out
To escape the treacheries we are burdened with
Living our lives at the edge of death
Knowing that one wrong step will lead us to hell
Our imagination will go wild with temptation
Left seldom a human being
One small clot of survival in my heart
Bandages cannot heal the troubles we have faced
I have seen hell and came back


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on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:37 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

You had me at thick ashes fill my lungs!

on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:45 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
Thanks guys :)

on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:35 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your´╗┐ funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

good job! i really like it it shows a lot of emotion! :)

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on May. 3 2010 at 8:00 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

this is really good- keep writing 




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