i was thinking...

December 20, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments

I was thinking…
Will forever last?
If the sun does not shine, then I moon will
Never is not forever
A positive is just two negatives
Forever is eternity in other words never
Everything happens as a result from choosing
Sometimes a frown is not an upside down smile maybe its just a frown
You cannot change what has already happened…so why regret


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on May. 16 2010 at 9:32 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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Thanks :) that means a whole lot :)

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:00 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I really like that last line:) It's so powerful, the poem is good I'll admit but the last line, just really struck me. I think i'll make it my quote on my profile if you don't mind. It's just so beautiful I want to share it with whoever i can. I'll tell it to my friends and use it in conversation. Wow, i think you may have just changed my life with one small line. Thank you  :)

on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I like the thought behind that. no I didnt get "blown away" or anything  but I really liked it.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:45 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
thank you so much.! :) You give me a lot of confidence.! Thanks :) i will be sure to read yours ive just been all so busy.!

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:16 pm
Claire_Milan PLATINUM, Waldorf, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Love that we cannot have is the one that lasts the longest, hurts the deepest, and feels the strongest because True Love cannot be found where it truly doesn't exist nor can it be hidden where it truly does."---A wise young man

so true. The last sentence blew me away. Thats the second piece of your's I have read and I think that I am on my way to becoming one of your biggest fans! You have me hooked! LOL




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