Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Love is pain Love is pain By Shy94, Hale, MI More by this author Pain is Pain When it hurts I'm to blame In the morning Sam's a dove All the sudden I'm in love « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Lonleydandy said... Jul. 4, 2010 at 9:08 pm: To tell you the truth, I love the rhyme scheme, and the flow is very nice. My only problem with it is that it is a little bit too short, and I don't really know what you are talking about if I didn't have the title there...hahaha, I do like it though! Report abuse shyshy21 said... Jan. 20, 2010 at 2:10 pm: Some body tell me what you think of this poem constructive critisism please!!!!!!!!