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Love is pain

Love is Love
Pain is Pain
When it hurts
I'm to blame
In the morning
Sam's a dove
All the sudden
I'm in love



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Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 9:08 pm:
To tell you the truth, I love the rhyme scheme, and the flow is very nice. My only problem with it is that it is a little bit too short, and I don't really know what you are talking about if I didn't have the title there...hahaha, I do like it though!
 
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shyshy21 said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 2:10 pm:
Some body tell me what you think of this poem constructive critisism please!!!!!!!!
 
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