Carnivals ( this is short but cute. sorry.) | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Carnivals ( this is short but cute. sorry.)

Carnivals ( this is short but cute. sorry.)

December 25, 2009
By Dakota BRONZE, Granite City, Illinois
More by this author
Dakota BRONZE, Granite City, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile

The ferris wheels the bumper cars,
it's better than watching stars.
County fairs ,big festivals,
I'd rather go to the carnivals!

Cotton candy, hot dogs galore,
all i want is more! more! more!
Carnivals are oh so fun,
I watch die out the Rising Sun.

© Joseph B., Mesquite, TX

The author's comments:
This poem is a small poem and i wrote it with my ex. bestie. Even though we are not friends i still found the poem cute. the top half she wrote the bottom half i wrote. enjoy!
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Untitled
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Death After Life
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
Breathing
By costarican93 GOLD
Washington, Louisiana
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

View profile
Poetry
Cracked vase
By Dale CROUCH PLATINUM
JOPLIN, Missouri
Dale CROUCH PLATINUM, JOPLIN, Missouri
29 articles 9 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
July Twentieth Two Thousand and Eight
By Poe_poe SILVER
DeMotte, Indiana
Poe_poe SILVER, DeMotte, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Unspeakable
By niceenouf PLATINUM
Garfield, New Jersey
niceenouf PLATINUM, Garfield, New Jersey
26 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"As we move on, you forget, we both move on, with no regret."

View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.