Words

December 31, 2009
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words are like little daggers
daggers aiming for a beating heart
a heart that is determined
determined to feel whole
a wholeness that words damage
damage of the tongue
a tongue full of painful daggers
daggers formed from words
the words we dont think about...

words are like smiles
smiles on a happy persons face
a face that is kept in memory
a memory of great things
things that make a person smile
smiles that form from a persons words
the words we say with care..

words are like books
books we read for knowledge
knowledge we need to survive
survival in a dangerous world
a world that can be changed
changed from what we say
said from what we know
known from reading books
books that are like words
the words we say with wisdom....





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DEiDRA<3 said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 4:04 pm
awhh this is soo good
 
lolatzazu said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 9:17 pm
awww, i really liked the style of this. the only qualm i have is that daggers gets used a lot, so it feels overused. it's definitely good though. c:
 
nayabites said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 9:16 pm
this is greattt. i love it. it's complex, but simplified with the definitions of each sentence following the next. you're a good writerrr. love ya. <3 c:
 
CrystalxB said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:54 pm
that was good ! lol i like how the last word started off the next line .
 
ROSExx replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 9:17 pm
uhmmm, ilyyy and those were amazingg, anddd yeahhh thats all i have to say !
 
iiwonder said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:51 pm
aww i like it. it has a cool little rhythm going on. ily.
 
awsomeme said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:38 pm
i really like this poem who ever keara noyd is i wan her to write me poems all the time
 
nsek41 replied...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 8:47 pm
Its reall cool
 
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