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Love Like Smoke

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It starts as a raging wildfire
wiping out everything in it's way
getting bigger and bigger
and hotter and hotter
-just like your touch
and your smile when you held me close-
but what's wild is unhealthy
and every fire gets put out
slowely at first
-like when you called every day,
then once a week,
then twice a month,
then four times over the whole summer-
and love becomes smoke
but smoke is still visable
and still has a shadow of warmth from the fire
until then the wind blows
-when i decided that was enough-
and what was love vanishes into thin air





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Shahed said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 4:53 pm
I love this!!!!
I got chills while reading this.. .. so great!
 
h3arts4ever replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:58 am
thanks a bunch! it's the 1st poem that i ever wrote, so it's not very good, ut thanks! :D
 
Shahed replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:50 am
acually.. its very good!Im proud of your first try ;)
 
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