Love Like Smoke

December 29, 2009
By h3arts4ever BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
h3arts4ever BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget falling in love... I'd rather fall into chocolate!"


It starts as a raging wildfire
wiping out everything in it's way
getting bigger and bigger
and hotter and hotter
-just like your touch
and your smile when you held me close-
but what's wild is unhealthy
and every fire gets put out
slowely at first
-like when you called every day,
then once a week,
then twice a month,
then four times over the whole summer-
and love becomes smoke
but smoke is still visable
and still has a shadow of warmth from the fire
until then the wind blows
-when i decided that was enough-
and what was love vanishes into thin air



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Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:50 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

acually.. its very good!Im proud of your first try ;)

on Feb. 27 2010 at 12:58 am
h3arts4ever BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Forget falling in love... I'd rather fall into chocolate!"

thanks a bunch! it's the 1st poem that i ever wrote, so it's not very good, ut thanks! :D

Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:53 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I love this!!!!

I got chills while reading this.. .. so great!


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