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My Heart Will Still Beat

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On the outside i'm smiling
but on the inside i'm dying,
As you walk by,
my heart begins to cry

I say I don't need you
I wish what I say was true,

It's hard to live with only half a heart,
Don't worry,
i'll find a new guy,
with a new start

It won't be easy,
i'm not saying that,
you'll always be in my heart,
and that's a fact

Regrets, Regrets,
So many I have...
just thinking about it makes me sad

I thought you made my heart complete,
but know that you're gone,
It's still gonna beat <3



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Babyjane said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 10:51 am:
I like the way you xpress the mood of a heartac.he  Its true, the first cut is always the deepest, but time will heal.  Keep writing Hallmark could use you.!
 
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Christina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 4:03 pm:
I really like the theme of this poem, and I adore the last line. the beginning, however, is a little.. common. if you know what I mena by that. I feel like i've heard it before. that doesn't make it less pretty, but it just doesn't stand out in my memory. however, the last line will stick with me.
 
LoveBam14 replied...
Feb. 6, 2010 at 3:33 am :
Aw thanks, i appreciate the advice :)
 
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