The War At My Heart's Door MAG

December 27, 2009
By WiTTz GOLD, Beach Park, Illinois
WiTTz GOLD, Beach Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Live While You Can, We Got A Short Life Span-Romeo Pott (WiTTz)

Forgive me if I must say
I'd rather love a girl
Than fight a war
I'd see her smile and stay
I would stay with you in my way
I salute to never betray
You're my general
So you will never see a funeral
That flag that you see
Is my surrender to your love
I'm sinking in your sea
But I'm trained from above
So I always use a glove
I still trust us no matter what
Do you understand yet?
I think I've said enough …

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This article has 2 comments.

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:34 pm
AddisonLauren BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Good job, I liked the poem. Work on your word choice, but it was cute.

Savannah000 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:32 am
Savannah000, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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it is a cute poem but the way it flows doesn't seem right. the point is sweet and cute but the word choice could improve. i do like this poem though, very nice.


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