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OUR SONG

December 7, 2009
By britt2010 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
britt2010 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Things happen for a reason."


I love you with all my heart that even sometimes
my brain can not realize why I get a fluttery feeling in my stomach,
or why my heart races so fast with the sight of your face,
and the faintest sound of your voice.
My eyes only see you and the world fades away,
no matter how tragic the world may seem, all I see is your face.
All the world is silent and only our hearts beating is left in the silence.
Our hearts play the rhytme of love, a song written by us.
A song so right that we become one
and sing our song loud with all our heart in it.
We sing loud and proud about our love and forever it will go on.


The author's comments:
My finace Jonathan really has opened my heart up and he really inspired me to express how i feel for him.

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on Jan. 19 2010 at 2:29 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

jonathan2011 said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 11:21 pm
i love this free response its awesome!!! so sweet and romatic all at once!!!

on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:17 pm
britt2010 BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things happen for a reason."

thank you so much

on Jan. 18 2010 at 1:13 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

This is beautiful and good luck with your fiance.