a sweet lie

December 16, 2009
By Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe


he looks into my hazel eyes
my auburn hair drifting through the wind of lies
we walk together hand in hand
his red lips so luscious call for me
but is this real? my angel asks me
but its too late
and i reach in
not thinking of the hate
he will soon bring
my careless self falls into his black hole
the endless questions that i hold
will never be answered

he holds my neck and brings me in further
i fall for it
how stupid could i be
but soon those tears will come for me
the pleasure brings me things i've never known
the desire fools me and so does he.

how long will it be
till' i find that he has been
cheating
on
ME?


The author's comments:
this piece came from personal experiences. I loved my boyfriend but turned out he was cheating on me this whole time.

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on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:24 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks so much :)

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:11 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
56 articles 12 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it's kinda fun to do the impossible." -Walt Disney
"Go live your dream"-Disney's Tangled

great job. i can relate. good job

on Feb. 10 2010 at 5:42 pm
-raining-grace- BRONZE, Allisaw, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
-Live Laugh Love-
Its the only way to survive this life.

i will do that absolutly

on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 4:40 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Wonderful poem. It's relatable, well written, and just all over great! Off to read more of your work now.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 2:04 am
-raining-grace- BRONZE, Allisaw, Alaska
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Live Laugh Love-
Its the only way to survive this life.

i am so sorry to hear about your boyfried. but this was a truely amazing poem tha i can relate to!


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