Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

a sweet lie

he looks into my hazel eyes
my auburn hair drifting through the wind of lies
we walk together hand in hand
his red lips so luscious call for me
but is this real? my angel asks me
but its too late
and i reach in
not thinking of the hate
he will soon bring
my careless self falls into his black hole
the endless questions that i hold
will never be answered

he holds my neck and brings me in further
i fall for it
how stupid could i be
but soon those tears will come for me
the pleasure brings me things i've never known
the desire fools me and so does he.

how long will it be
till' i find that he has been
cheating
on
ME?




Join the Discussion


This article has 7 comments. Post your own!

RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 7:11 pm:
great job. i can relate. good job
 
alicecullenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:24 pm :
thanks so much :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
little-miss-sunshine said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
Wonderful poem. It's relatable, well written, and just all over great! Off to read more of your work now.
 
alicecullenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 9:10 am :
hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
-raining-grace- said...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 2:04 am:
i am so sorry to hear about your boyfried. but this was a truely amazing poem tha i can relate to!
 
alicecullenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 9:10 am :
hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!
 
-raining-grace- replied...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 5:42 pm :
i will do that absolutly
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback