The Good Will

December 15, 2009
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Even the early one
riding with the storm
Could not provide
the light that I need.
You told me its all right,
And then I realized
This ain’t no place for me.

But it was all in good heart
Torn right apart
Give me a place to breathe,
To put my mind to bed
To put it back in my head.
I close my eyes
And then I start to bleed.

Toying with my head
I’ve got to shake it
You gave me this feeling
Now show me how it feels

And with the founders
I am not concerned.
You’d never see it how I do.
If you came to win,
You better come again
You still can’t spark a fire
Like I do.

As the sunlight devours
I will stand,
And let hope begin again.
In my final hour
Keep my demands
Riding with the wind,
Riding with the wind,
Riding in the end,
Or dying in the end.


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on Sep. 23 2011 at 7:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

Thats nice,cuz uhh...i wrote this to audioslave. Its a parody to "show me how to live"

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 9:35 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

It sounds like someone, a winner, someone who's really good at something, is putting everything on the line and is fighting a battle to the top. Reminds me of good sports movies and rap songs. 

Abstract but in way where you can get still get a message. Also holds an exotic beauty. :)


on Jul. 30 2010 at 3:23 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

(silence).

on Jul. 30 2010 at 1:20 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

...I still don't get it...

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:13 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i'm just mad at the randomness because you ask how i figure you're a girl and i'm like cause you said something abut having pink curtains and sharing a room with your sisters and then youre like oh i dont share a room anymore and my curtains are green and i'm like come on really. its just the irony of it.

on Jul. 29 2010 at 5:12 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Hahaha!  That's funny!  ...don't know where that ties into you stabbing me, but still!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 5:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"hey i really really need a textbook for next period.can i hold yours?" "sure adaboosnada." "thanx, where is it?" "its at home."

on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:02 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Um.....why?

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:11 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I should stab you captain.

on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:25 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Hm....well I guess that if I were a guy, having pink curtains and sleeping with my sisters would be kind of creepy.  Haha, lovely picture....but I don't share a room with my sisters anymore, and my curtains are green.

on Jul. 18 2010 at 5:18 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

it matters that you're a girl, it just doesnt matter to me that you're a girl. you said something about pink curtains and sharing a room with your sisters.

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:05 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Oh, I see.  In what ways did my responses drive you to believe that I was a girl?  And why does it not matter?

on Jul. 6 2010 at 8:25 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

reread me captain.

on Jul. 6 2010 at 9:30 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

....where did gender come in?

on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:42 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

it all started from me answering your rhetorical question. i love your loving that. pure awesomeness captain. your hilarious. its funny because a few times you've said something and i was like"oh yeah, thats right, this is a girl". you know gender doesnt matter to me. its all the same to me captain.

on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:11 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I love how whatever we were talking about about your article/poem is like nonexistent now...

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmm... right you're captain. stand under i. captain.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:22 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

...so did I...maybe this is a time to...as you say...reread me?

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

actaully i meant doing something awesome and forgetting how you did it.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 11:31 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

well, i don't know, cause after you do it awesomely, then you try to show someone how awesome it is, and you can't do it again because you didn't know how you'd done it in the first place


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