Dead, You don’t Know the Meaning (trust me)

November 22, 2009
By , georgetown, TX
I’m not alive
At least not today
I’m disappearing
In an unusual way

Death called me at a time
Messed with my head
Spilled a million rhymes
And I want to be dead

A stray cloud passing by
Sometimes it makes me wanna cry
With all of this stress
Makes me feel so darn depressed

Suffocation, is a lesson
To breathe, and to fade
Your life is ruled by your rules
And whatever you make, or made

Lies drown the sea
War escapes you and me
Destroying kids with stupidity
America and white trash
Add some s***** words
With f***ed up suburbs
Silly gang games that are
Taking over the world

Logic twisted inside your head
Complications with the dead
And I’m begging you please
If you ever find simplicity- call me.

But this doesn’t change the fact
That my life is useless
I guess I could just contain myself
I guess I could just brainwash myself


Does nobody care?
Is nobody out there?

Let’s take a roll
I’ll start a vote
A fair poll
To see if I’m alive, because…

I don’t think I am, in any way
At least not today





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firefly said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 3:45 pm
OH MY GOD it was really good and can of scarry to, in a way that even if you died you still would be unhappy. nice rhymes.
 
Firetorn said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 12:37 am
This poem has captured a moment in everyones life at one point or another. The poem receives two thumbs up from me
 
STAR-DUST said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 5:12 pm
very interesting poem its almost as if your angry at the world yet, even death does not phase you.. kinda good in the creepy way, like great word diction and rythme.. liked it
 
Echohawk said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 4:32 pm
I love this poem. The writer of this poem is very talented and captures the mood perfectly
 
Beljack replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 8:13 pm
I never appreciate despair, but beyond that this poem captures my emotions completely. What's more, the title itself dares against the reader which only makes me all the more want to understand, want to find something--want to be there. Very well done!
 
paradise-of-hell replied...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 11:43 pm
ha.. thanks i love daring peoples morals and values.. and perhaps how they percieve the world.. so i have a clearer view...
 
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