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rebirth of a determined man

December 18, 2009
By Seabosking05 BRONZE, Upton, Massachusetts
Seabosking05 BRONZE, Upton, Massachusetts
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my mind reborn everyday
my thoughts begin to sway
change is constant i me
high and low tide like the sea
my work from yesterday will not safice today
i am not changed by what you say but
my mind matures at every step with every second of everyday
life is a road of twist and turns
but i walk forward not to be turned yet the road changes as i go and so do i.



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Oracion SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:44 am
Oracion SILVER, Muskogee, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Fiction's not much different from Reality, sometimes people just forget to look for the magic in their own lives

All right I really like this poem. I especially like line 7 with the repetition of "every". I just like some good repetition. But since I can't find too much wrong, I'm gonna get real nit-picky. "Suffice" not "safice", unless that was intentional. Keep writing!