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First MAG

December 13, 2009
By LionsInHerHair BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
LionsInHerHair BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"This poem may have meant nothing to you but I am confident that tonight my taking the time to actually write out my anger instead of acting on it has saved the life of at least eleven people in parking enforcement."- Buddy Wakefield


I am Eve
because weren't we all, once?

I walk, carrying the rib of another
as my own and it is
comforting
to know
that I am a second-hand creation.

Being the original would mean a
closeness to He-Who-Rests-On-The-Seventh-Day
This, cannot be abided.

I have no care to seek
those who would lock me in a
garden with snakes in the apple trees.



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on May. 7 2014 at 9:16 am
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

THIS IS SO AWESOME :D

on May. 11 2010 at 9:09 am
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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Hey LionsInHerHair,

I really like this poem, but I wanted to make sure that you didn't get the idea from a poem of mine which is also called First and also Adam and Eve themed. It could be complete coincidence, but I just wanted to make sure. I know also that sometimes I use other writers' ideas without meaning to. You can check out my poem under My Work.

Thanks,

Grania