first cut

December 23, 2009
I touch the blade to my skin,
Feeling it scratch my thigh,
Not sure what it’s doing,
Until I see little bubbles of blood,
I stare in fascination,
What have I done?
I hear her scream,
She can’t wait till I’m gone,
I wonder if she ever means it,
If deep down she just wants me to go away,
Why he won’t save me.

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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 4:05 am
This piece is good.. :)
I kind of like it. But i think there's something missing.. and you have to figure that out 
Oh_ShelbY_XD said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 3:06 pm
stunning...simply stunning
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 30, 2011 at 1:33 am
Put a ? at the end of the last sentence. Great job.
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