These Innocent Eyes

December 23, 2009
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these innocent-blue eyes watch
in death cloaked fear,
as beauty turns to ash.

these innocent-blue eyes hope,
that when it ends
we continue living.

these innocent-blue eyes witness
in dreaded suspense
as lives are torn apart.

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notebookgirl said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 6:24 pm
very beautiful and very sad
the_Horsegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 3:52 pm
Wow. Deep. I really liked this poem, and I really can't think of any changes to make. I especially liked the first stanza, the "beauty turned to ash" part.
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