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Spring MAG

December 23, 2009
By TimeMachine SILVER, Mercer Island, Washington
TimeMachine SILVER, Mercer Island, Washington
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Sunlight warms my face
And the concrete beneath my feet
Leaves imprints on my soles.
Tufts of grass
Sway flimsily.
A bare tree with the potential
To wear a floral crown
Watches pliant dandelions
Succumb to
A
Swift
Breeze.



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so_joy SILVER said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 8:40 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

 Mind checking out some of my work?:)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 17 2012 at 8:58 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

That's me^

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:52 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:52 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:52 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! Spring is my favorite season, and this is one of my favorite poems about it. I love the way you organized the last four lines to have two or less words per line-it's very dramatic. Altogether outstanding poem.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


guitarist said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 4:45 pm
Your poem makes me ache for spring. Nice work!


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