My Quiet Retreat

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When fires burn
And Chaos churns
I turn to my quiet retreat.

There is such a place that I call my own.
A place where no one can judge.
Where the only sound is the hushed in and out of my breathing.
This is my quiet retreat.

Where no one can find me
Where love is easily found.
This is my quiet retreat.

A place that vanquishes all of my problems and puts me at peace.
This is my quiet retreat.

My private place where there is no hate and I am the most beautiful.
This is my quiet retreat.

Where only I can find and only I can enter.
This is my mind.
This is my quiet retreat.





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hxcRocker said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 4:02 am
I feel this same way alot. My mind is always my quiet retreat. Very good. Keep writing
 
Breebear replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 3:24 pm
thanks! =]
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 1:21 am
Beautiful.
 
Breebear replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 8:04 pm
thanks! =]
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 3:25 pm
yeps comment on my stuff plz   it's not approved yet but when it is i would appreciate the comments!! thx
 
Breebear replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 8:03 pm
will do =]
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 1:34 am
thanks!!!!!!!!!!! =)
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 5:16 pm
one of my short stories was posted  could u plz comment!!!
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 5:34 pm
search love. and look for a story anonymous in Wailuku HI.  I think i clicked that box on accident
 
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