My Quiet Retreat

December 23, 2009
By Breebear BRONZE, Lake Forest, California
Breebear BRONZE, Lake Forest, California
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When fires burn
And Chaos churns
I turn to my quiet retreat.

There is such a place that I call my own.
A place where no one can judge.
Where the only sound is the hushed in and out of my breathing.
This is my quiet retreat.

Where no one can find me
Where love is easily found.
This is my quiet retreat.

A place that vanquishes all of my problems and puts me at peace.
This is my quiet retreat.

My private place where there is no hate and I am the most beautiful.
This is my quiet retreat.

Where only I can find and only I can enter.
This is my mind.
This is my quiet retreat.

The author's comments:
I hope that from this poem, people can see that there is an easy escape from all your problems and drama. Just escape to your mind. No one can hurt you.

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on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:34 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
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search love. and look for a story anonymous in Wailuku HI.  I think i clicked that box on accident

on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:16 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

one of my short stories was posted  could u plz comment!!!

on Apr. 4 2010 at 3:24 pm
Breebear BRONZE, Lake Forest, California
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thanks! =]

on Apr. 4 2010 at 4:02 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I feel this same way alot. My mind is always my quiet retreat. Very good. Keep writing

on Apr. 4 2010 at 1:34 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

thanks!!!!!!!!!!! =)

on Apr. 3 2010 at 8:03 pm
Breebear BRONZE, Lake Forest, California
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will do =]

on Apr. 3 2010 at 3:25 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

yeps comment on my stuff plz   it's not approved yet but when it is i would appreciate the comments!! thx

on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:04 pm
Breebear BRONZE, Lake Forest, California
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thanks! =]

on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:21 am
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

Beautiful.


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