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I saw God today

In a pebble
splashing ripples in the water
In a goldenrod
blowing in the wind.
I saw him in the sunrise
I saw him in the sea.
I saw him as I looked and saw
a mother soon to be.

When looking past
nature's glow
to view the pains of man
I saw my God
protect a child
He held him in his hand.
And as the bullies made their taunts
The child thought to break
But my God whispered in his ear
My child, you're pain I'll take.
Just hide behind my loving grace
and place your faith in me
and I'll take you to a city
where you'll swim in crystal seas.





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christianjedi said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 9:08 pm
wow. Beautiful poem! I'm glad you're willing to make a stand for your faith.
 
~MidnightAngel~ replied...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 6:35 pm
This is amazing! I have never been into poetry, but even to me this is awsome!!!
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Whylime replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 1:14 pm
you made me cry! BEEE-youuu-TI-Full! I came to read some of your work because i saw some of your comments on the forums.. and i like your way of thinking (: this could so be published! i can seeee it nowww (:and LUCKY! i want chickens! now that i live in tennesse its allowed but my parents would say noooo... keep writing!
 
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