A Late Night Ride.

December 11, 2009
By Bo-baitlin BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
Bo-baitlin BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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Running and Stressing is making it hard
We make great distance in very short time
Arrived at the gate but forgot our card
Hitting the gate we arrived on the dime
Into the park for a couple of rides
Ran into no lines because it was late
Heading down to Splash Mountain we took strides
Appeared to be empty a total fate
But times running out and we got to go
I bought no gifts or souvenirs oh dear
Waiting in line I create a foe
Times not on my side it’s my biggest fear
I buy all my gifts as fast as I can
I gave my family gifts and one to Stan

The author's comments:
This sonnet was based off a trip I went on to Disneyland and rushing through the park before it closed.

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on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:29 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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on Jan. 6 2010 at 2:47 pm
timtebowlover!!! BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Emily eats lightning Farts thunder"

This poem reminds me of memories that I had of a trip to Dinsney land. It brought tears to my eyes of memories past.

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