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Dying Alone

Alone down in this hole
But for the little bugs
Crawling up the walls
Darkness seeps in
Enough! you want to yell
For the silence is
Ghastly and you strain to
Hear anyone out there
Ignorance is bliss
Knowing nothing of your fate
Little do you know
Many possible deaths are
Near at any given time
One being dehydration
Plus lack of any warmth
Quiet is everything
Rather like your approaching death
Shivers going down your spine
Truthfully you are scared
Underground in this
Vertical hole is not
Where you want to be
Xeric is this place
You are going to die soon
Zero chance you'll survive





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Artemis--SherwoodThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 14, 2011 at 5:26 pm

Wow. O.O Again.

You have an amazing sense of creativity! I wish mine was that awesome, as were my writing skills.... Anyways, could you read my book 'Edge of Darkness' and comment on it? :)

 
Powd3er said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 2:37 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
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