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the end.

December 11, 2009
By alliloverr. GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
alliloverr. GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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this is surreal
my world is upside down
the room s spinning
im getting dizzy

such a short distance
i reach, i reach, i reach
i cannot touch it
even when i try my best

the sky falls around me
the ground is crumbling
my heart is breaking
and my world is fading

so many questions
left unanswered
i cant stop the want or hurt
because now; you have stopped
everything


The author's comments:
this poem is about a breakup and how it feels like the end of the world

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on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:41 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx