A Thousand Miles

December 8, 2009
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I wouldn't care how far I'd have to come,
I wouldn't walk a thousand miles I'd run.
I love you
I wouldn't slow down my pace,
Until I saw your pretty face.
I love you
And if I stumbled on my way to you,
I'd think of your smile to get me through.
I love you
I'd dream about you every day,
Until you were in my arms to stay.
I love you
And once I'm there I'll whisper in your ear,
The only words you'll ever hear...
I love you
So call my name and I'll be there,
Forever and always we will share.
I love you

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michelle98 said...
Dec. 31, 2014 at 4:55 pm
This is my dream
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15, 2012 at 4:33 pm
You know I bet this is exactly the kind of thing every girl wants from a guy! It's soooo sweet,most girls are suckers for sweet. Nicely written! Ps.please check out my work!
TheDance said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 3:57 pm
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! if only all guys were really that sweet. :(
RandomRanda said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 9:03 am
LOVE it!!!!
D. said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 12:23 pm
AWWWW!!!!! How sweet!
EnochDreams said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 11:46 am
I accidentally  subscribed to your stuff, but i really like it so far :) ... I have alot about relationships but they are pending!
justbe-3 said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 8:19 pm
This is beyond cute, i just love your work! I tagged this as a favorite :) It's funny because about half of my favorites are your work. You are absolutely my favorite writer on this site. You have a lot of talent, keep writing!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 7:53 pm
Thank you so much! You are such an amazing writer yourself!!!
PoemLoverSara said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 2:20 pm
this is wonderfull!!! i feel the same way, good job i love it!!:)
bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 6:24 pm
Aw thank you sooo much;)
just.me_899 said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 2:54 pm
*snif* that was sooo, *sigh* cute n sweet n nice n beautiful :))) aaa-hawww >.< ur a greattly talented writer!!! this was amazing..
bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 11:35 am
Awwww thank you so much!!!
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 5:59 pm

omg , I can totally relate . It really makes me think , awesome job :)

btw : I have 2 new poems up :) please check it out if you want to since you wanted to read more from me lolss , byeee (:

bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 11:34 am
Thank you:):)
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2010 at 7:17 pm
Awwww... that's sooooo sweet! Great job! i hope someday a guy would be willing to do anything for me!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 11:18 am
Aw Thank you:) I hope a guy will do the same for me too!
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 9:25 pm
You're welcome!
Shells said...
May 21, 2010 at 5:33 pm
This almost made me cry.  Very good job.
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 26, 2010 at 11:10 am
Aww:) Thank u
isabel18 said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:02 pm
I really liked it!
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