A Thousand Miles

December 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I wouldn't care how far I'd have to come,
I wouldn't walk a thousand miles I'd run.
I love you
I wouldn't slow down my pace,
Until I saw your pretty face.
I love you
And if I stumbled on my way to you,
I'd think of your smile to get me through.
I love you
I'd dream about you every day,
Until you were in my arms to stay.
I love you
And once I'm there I'll whisper in your ear,
The only words you'll ever hear...
I love you
So call my name and I'll be there,
Forever and always we will share.
I love you


The author's comments:
I was thinking about a guy's love for his girl...and when he's the right guy he'll do anything for his love...and nowhere is too far for him to travel to see her pretty face...and nothing in the world can tear the two apart...it's precious...

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on Dec. 31 2014 at 4:55 pm
michelle98 SILVER, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you're gonna get," Forest Gump

This is my dream

on May. 15 2012 at 4:33 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

You know I bet this is exactly the kind of thing every girl wants from a guy! It's soooo sweet,most girls are suckers for sweet. Nicely written! Ps.please check out my work!

on Dec. 14 2011 at 3:57 pm
MoonHeart SILVER, PITTSBURGH, Pennsylvania
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! if only all guys were really that sweet. :(

on Oct. 12 2011 at 9:03 am
RandomRanda GOLD, Paoli, Indiana
10 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ill never improve, if i don't try
I'm Dancing for my life (im living my life).
Im all me! NO ONE is changing me!

LOVE it!!!!

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on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:23 pm
AWWWW!!!!! How sweet!

on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:46 am
EnochDreams GOLD, Simi Valley, California
12 articles 8 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hence poetry is something more philosophic and of graver importance than history, since its statements are rather of the nature of universals, whereas those of history are singulars. - Aristotle

‎"I think the biggest thing that my failures have taught me is that you can't succeed without failing"

-Rick Riordan

I accidentally  subscribed to your stuff, but i really like it so far :) ... I have alot about relationships but they are pending!

on Aug. 15 2010 at 7:53 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much! You are such an amazing writer yourself!!!

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on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:19 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

This is beyond cute, i just love your work! I tagged this as a favorite :) It's funny because about half of my favorites are your work. You are absolutely my favorite writer on this site. You have a lot of talent, keep writing!

on Aug. 11 2010 at 6:24 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aw thank you sooo much;)

on Aug. 11 2010 at 2:20 pm
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love Is Nothing But A Dream♥

this is wonderfull!!! i feel the same way, good job i love it!!:)

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:35 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awwww thank you so much!!!

on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:34 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:):)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 2:54 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

*snif* that was sooo, *sigh* cute n sweet n nice n beautiful :))) aaa-hawww >.< ur a greattly talented writer!!! this was amazing..

on Jun. 29 2010 at 5:59 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

omg , I can totally relate . It really makes me think , awesome job :)

btw : I have 2 new poems up :) please check it out if you want to since you wanted to read more from me lolss , byeee (:


on Jun. 3 2010 at 9:25 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

You're welcome!

on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:18 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aw Thank you:) I hope a guy will do the same for me too!

on May. 30 2010 at 7:17 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
16 articles 0 photos 620 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

Awwww... that's sooooo sweet! Great job! i hope someday a guy would be willing to do anything for me!

on May. 26 2010 at 11:11 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank's...this is personally one of my fav poems...so I'm glad you like it also:)

on May. 26 2010 at 11:10 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Aww:) Thank u

Shells SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 5:33 pm
Shells SILVER, Dixon, Wyoming
7 articles 6 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The dye has been cast. The decision has been made. I have stepped over the line. I won’t look back, let up, slow down, or back away. My past is redeemed, my present makes sense, my future secure. I’m done with low living, sight walking, small planning, colorless dreams, tamed visions, mundane talking, cheap living and dwarfed goals: I no longer need preeminence, prosperity, positions, promotions, or popularity. I don’t have to be right, first, tops, recognized, praised, regarded or rewarded. I now live by faith, lean on His presence, walk with patience, live by prayer and labor with power. My face is set, my goal is Heaven, my road is narrow, my way is rough, my companions are few, my Guide is reliable, my mission clear. I cannot be bought, compromised, detoured, lured away, turned back, deluded or delayed. I will not flinch in the face of sacrifice, hesitate in the presence of adversary, negotiate at the table of the enemy, ponder at the pool of popularity or meander in the maze of mediocrity. I won’t give up, shut up, let up, until I have stayed up, stored up, prayed up, paid up, and spoken up for the cause of Christ. I am a disciple of the lord Jesus Christ.” - African martyred for Christ.

This almost made me cry.  Very good job.




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