Broken hearts and twisted minds

Come and join me for the ride, he says
Its simple, just let me inside your mind.
You've always wanted a fairytale
So will you let me make it come true?
All it involves is me and you.
No one will ever like me, she says.
But this guy has made her feel different instead.
So she let him enter wonders anew,
A place that has only housed a few.
She is the bell of the ball,
For once center stage.
Too bad this was just a charade.
A kiss goodnight and the clock struck twelve,
Well that marked the end of that "fairytale".
It takes time for her to heal from all these games.
He broke her heart and should feel ashamed
But he simply moves on overlooking her pain.
The story is up and the final score,
Two points for him being a w****.
Your heart is sacred, don't give it away to be led astray,
Keep it locked up and wait for the right guy.
Someone who doesn't kiss and then say goodbye.





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forbiddenxwords said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 11:57 pm
Im an amateur. But this is dope. I like how you wrote in stanzas made the read all the more interesting. Cant wait to read your other poems :)
 
drowning-in-sorrow replied...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 11:59 pm
Trust me when I say I am an amateur as well. I jus write my experiences. Some are good were as others are really bad. You just have to keep practicing.  :)  You will get better with time.
 
forbiddenxwords replied...
Oct. 9, 2010 at 11:14 pm
Maybe we can get better together.?
 
drowning-in-sorrow replied...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 6:55 pm
Of course. Sorry for the late reply but we can def get better together.  :)
 
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