December 5, 2009
By Retto GOLD, Long Beach, California
Retto GOLD, Long Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love me, hate me, but you will remember me." Anthony G.

Religiously and faithfully
I complete my daily ritual
No thoughts of life or vanity
My feelings, pure, weren’t mutual
You tossed me aside, so casually
We still butt heads, a lover’s duel

I place the blame, on me alone
I will not try, you won’t atone
For your misdeeds, so childish
Talking about me, I only wish
That was all you did behind my back
I lied to you? Is that a fact?

My honesty
Surprised even me
I only wish that you could care
And that with your feelings, you could share
Don’t give me that, your angry stare
As if my words aren’t true and fair

The author's comments:
Another day, another pointless rant. xD Written as I lie awake pondering my failed relationships. Read and Review, I would greatly appreciate it. (cleaned up, as opposed to the version I posted on writers-network)

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