Miracle in the Making

December 5, 2009
By Retto GOLD, Long Beach, California
Retto GOLD, Long Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love me, hate me, but you will remember me." Anthony G.

Together, two lovers stand

Above the world

An eternity passes between each moment

A lifetime in her eyes

She caresses him

She possesses him

To him, she is life in beauty

To him, the cosmos bow

As, at last, he is now complete

As I watch, my breath escapes

To witness a miracle such as this

They careen through the ragged boundaries of existence

No longer human, they are truly free

And as she falls into his loving embrace

I can feel the white-hot energy of incomprehensible emotion

I no longer claim to understand the meaning of “love”

But, neither do I deny the immense power it undeniably radiates

In pure selflessness, he holds the remainder of hope for all living entities

And in their wake, are truly the most delicate and endangered character traits of all

Compassion, Honesty, Innocence, and above all, Sincerity

They sacrifice all for one another

An act that purifies

An act that is beyond words

And act that is called…


The author's comments:
My take on the feelings of being truly in love with somebody. Probably my first "happy" poem, Im dedicating this to my best friend and brother Eric.

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