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November 23, 2009
By Amityyy SILVER, Hamersville, Ohio
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"What we write is who we are."

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When I see you, you take my breath away.
When you walk by me, I melt into a puddle.
You are the perfect guy.
After we got together I realized you weren't.
You said you would love me forever,
but you lied.
Instead, you broke me in two.
I'm glad you left the pieces.
Now Jesus can put me back together.

© Yaniris M., Boston, MA

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Amityyy SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 3:31 pm
Amityyy SILVER, Hamersville, Ohio
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Thank you so much. You just made my day. You and your family will always be in my thoughts and prayers.
EmelyJ GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 4:46 pm
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I can describe this poem in 1 word:AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seriously, this poem is great. You have a great talent in speaking the truth. GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!