Tragic Illusions This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

December 5, 2009
Blood behind roses,
Pain echoing the shutting doors,
Lies coloring every tone,
Shadows of kisses,
And hints of wane smiles

Once, it was

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Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 7:28 pm
I like the tragedy behind it all and after every line, I paused and illustrated a tragedy to fit the line in my head. I love the thinking behind this poem.
SweetHeart_707 replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 11:55 am
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comment. Really, thank you.
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