What is love?

December 10, 2009
By unique SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
unique SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Trust in Jehovah with all your heart and do not lean upon your own understanding, in all your ways take notice of him and he himself will make your paths straight.









Proverbs 3: 5-6


Tell me Jehovah
What is love?
Does love hurt to the point to where it makes you wanna cry?
Well if thats not so, then my father doesnt love me.
No, not I
Tell me what love is , I'm dying to know.
Tell me what love is cause I dont thind this is it. You tell me, you tell me!
Does love hurt with words?
Does love hurt with dirty looks or even slaps/
Well if not then why does my father do these things to me?
You see know blood, but yet I feel lide i'm bleeding.
Tell me what love is.
Tell me why it hurts so.......











much.


The author's comments:
This is how I feel about my father and it just came up in my head and I wrote it down.

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unique SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:06 pm
unique SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Trust in Jehovah with all your heart and do not lean upon your own understanding, in all your ways take notice of him and he himself will make your paths straight.









Proverbs 3: 5-6

awsome i didnt even read the rest of your comment until now but thank you your'e very encouranging. ( i no i didnt spell that right but you no what word im trying to say.) oh and thank you for rating my poem. since i no you like poems about Jehovah ill put some more on there.

unique SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:03 pm
unique SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Trust in Jehovah with all your heart and do not lean upon your own understanding, in all your ways take notice of him and he himself will make your paths straight.









Proverbs 3: 5-6

thank you im glad you can relate. my dad is a witness though and also my mom. but yeah i will keep you in my prayers cause i know that can be hard


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