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I found love in you,
but I can't understand why,
I found hope in you,
when I thought it was gone,
I found color again,
no more greys and blacks,
I found love in,
wich was unrequited,
I still love you,
but your love belongs to another,
I have tryed everything to make you notice, without my temple being violated, I wonder, what would make you love me too, if I lost ten ponds, if I dyed my hair, if I became new;
I found love in you,
and I can't understan why,
all I know is that your love is with another, and the pieces of heart are broken, like pieces of shattered glass





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Katie.T. said...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 1:54 pm
So relatable... I love reading poems about love because that is what most of my poems are about. Keep it up!
 
Rage97 replied...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 12:41 pm
Thank you so much for viewing my poem I haven't had much feed back on my poems, It meens a lot to know I can achieve my main goal which is to relate and bring real feeling to my pieces
 
Katie.T. replied...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 4:51 pm
Well I love to rate and/or comment on poems that I like. I enjoy when people rate mine so I always try to do the same for others. Also, I seem to not get much feedback either, so your not alone!
 
Rage97 replied...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 5:04 am
Thank you, and you work is kick but I cryed it's really good!!!!!!! Love lots lilly
 
HOT-P!NK said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 7:22 pm
i like this, it is sorta my lfe right now. well keep writing!!
 
Rage97 replied...
Dec. 28, 2009 at 10:09 am
Thank you so much for the comment and I'm at that point to, you'll get through it!!!
 
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