December 2, 2009
Ripped in two
I feel so alone

The one I loved
Now lost to me

The one I loved
Did no love me

The only one
I ever wanted
Will never want me

I thought we would spend life together
But she said not with me

I poured out my love
but got nothing back

what did I do
what did I say

how can I make this
just all go away

I feel so lost
I thought you would guide me

But now you are gone
You have forgotten about me

I am no longer loved
I am no longer wanted

Your feelings may change for me
But mine will never change for you

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EleanorRigbysGospelofPeace This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 2:28 pm
Wow...I've read all of your current work and I am absolutely in love with it. You said you just started writing poetry, and man, are you a natural. The words are so flowing and easy to read. You convey emotions really well. Keep writing; I will be on the lookout for more to read!
UnknownToTheWorld replied...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 6:25 am
Wow no one has ever told me i was really good thanks so much for the support i promise there will be more now
UnknownToTheWorld replied...
Jan. 12, 2010 at 6:28 am
Oh and my next one will be called Lullaby just to throw that out there
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