A Life's Lie

December 1, 2009
By Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 212 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison


You say it's wretched
You say it's grotesque
You say it's unbearable
But I know you life is nothing,
Nothing like that

You say you'll endure it
That it's a scar you'll live with
You say I know nothing
But I can read in between the lines.

You say you've been abused
But you lie in vain
The trust I gave you slaps me in the face
I know your life is nothing,
Nothing like that

You say I don't understand
But that's the problem

I do


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on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:09 am
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

wow, this is really effective, can completely empathise, however i don't think that we can judge what other people's lives are really like. appearances can be very deceiving. I know I don't know the exact situation you're talking about but sometimes - even if they're lying, it's because somethings wrong and they still need help. anywyas...really great write. I like the language choice a lot.

on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:41 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

Ah.. so u know my ex-bff? sounds just like her. Keep up the good work!


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